First sample peer response
I admire the passion you have shown towards community nursing. Also, your views on this particular issue are quite succinctly expressed. Frankly, I strongly agree with your assertion about the significance of community health and the diverse roles nurses have to play towards its fulfilment. Indeed, community health nursing plays a greater role in healthcare as it seeks to promote the wellbeing of individuals within a community. Physicians and nurses additionally play a greater role in ensuring the safety of a nation (Stanhope & Lancaster, 2019). Community health nurses also have to carry out rigorous clinical health analyses in a bid to develop profound health findings needed to inform current and existing interventions of treatment (Stanhope & Lancaster, 2019). From a personal standpoint, I strongly agree that a public nurse plays a greater role in the grander scheme of safeguarding human health. As such, individuals who particularly pursue such a career path must be ready to assume the responsibility underlying protection of the health of a community. Overall, I think you make a good speech and valid arguments.
Second sample peer response
I love your approach to this critical discussion and your introduction as well. I think it informs the audience about the discussion question, thereby setting the right platform for the audience to gain a proper understating of the analysis captured within the discussion. Assumption of the role of a care provider is an important vocational calling and demands one to rise up to their occasion in terms of delivering quality healthcare services (de Almeida Melo et al., 2018). Indeed, you show a lot of passion about pursuing this vocation, and that is a step in the right direction, as passion opens the gates towards the accomplishment of successful feats. Personally, I think you have made a strong case about your intended aspiration to become a healthcare provider. Nonetheless, I love your insights into the critical processes circumventing the treatment processes, such as diagnosis, treatment, and care. That goes to show the level of interest you have pursuant to this career. Importantly, I think you have made your case very well.
de Almeida Melo, P. M., Gomes da Silva, R. C., & da Silva Jesus Figueiredo, M. H. (2018). Attention foci in community health nursing and community empowerment: a qualitative study. Revista de Enfermagem Referência, 4(19).
Stanhope, M., & Lancaster, J. (2019). Public health nursing e-book: Population-centered health care in the community. Elsevier Health Sciences.